Friday, April 1, 2016


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Sun

The sun hits the grounds
like the water bounds.
With flowers blooming
The world keeps turning.
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  1. AnonymousApril 4, 2016 at 7:58 AM

    One tip of the hat is that your imagery was very detailed and stood out
    You love nature without a doubt
    One wag of the finger you didn't make your sentences longer with more description
    One way you can fix this is add more vision

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